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The sotries are meant to be raw and un fixed in grammer . I was aware of it bro and thanks for your comments . I did do the fix in all fo that and it just killed the story for how it sounded so I decided to keep it as raw as possible right off my fingers and unto the word.doc .
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lol damn people cant speel no more fubag wats up lol lol
sorry for speeling but cant afford spell checker program,naw jk Good work fubah I hope people like this the idea is great |
What?
Fubah you mean to tell me that you did not even use any of the stuff I suggested??? Dam brother... I am really taken back by it... lol evil:
Raw is right.. eek: Well, that Blaster or Plaster fart person has a valid point.. but hey you know I am on your side.. biggrin: Hey Capt.... you catfish hoe you! Shit bro just ICQ me and I will explain how to enable your spell checker that you did not know you have... cool: And leave the dam chickens alone... can't afford to build a new coupe... hehe oOo: R || F |
"There is a Very Fine Line Between "Hobby and Mental Illness". AND I THINK YOU'VE CROSSED IT!!! evil:
Nice shotty man!!! I was Bucking people up with it last night!!! biggrin: ttyl on ICQ! |
cool. I can't find one thing in that post that made sense biggrin:
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I meant Recoil's post sry.
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well i understand the catfish part and chickens lol hahah
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its either an inside joke or Washington humor! biggrin: evil:
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or "Wahington" as recoil spells it..... biggrin: maybe u should invest in that spell checker too!!!! evil:
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Huh?
Yes inside joke and yes I am way over that line Hobbster.. evil:
I am not sure about the Washington thing though.... eek: You boys be nice to me or I will put a cap in your ass... you here me hillbilly boys? M16: R || F |
nice job, it great cool: biggrin:
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So you made a fix, I assume, using some variation of proper writing lessons and then it killed the story? Hummmm How could it... what story? The way it is written now sounds like a bunch of illiterate gibberish... oOo: Your screwing up a potential good thing here... but I guess all great writers have just published there shit work and done real well with out the help of an editor... eek: Attention! Little Johnny you are supposed to come out and play army now... sheesh! cool: Can't wait to read the next one.... |
Dude, Chill out man!!! I think you made your point in your 1st post. No need to be an asshole about it. If you dont like it then dont download it!
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