The sotries are meant to be raw and un fixed in grammer . I was aware of it bro and thanks for your comments . I did do the fix in all fo that and it just killed the story for how it sounded so I decided to keep it as raw as possible right off my fingers and unto the word.doc .

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lol damn people cant speel no more fubag wats up lol lol
sorry for speeling but cant afford spell checker program,naw jk

Good work fubah I hope people like this the idea is great

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Fubah you mean to tell me that you did not even use any of the stuff I suggested??? Dam brother... I am really taken back by it... lol evil:

Raw is right.. eek: Well, that Blaster or Plaster fart person has a valid point.. but hey you know I am on your side.. biggrin:

Hey Capt.... you catfish hoe you! Shit bro just ICQ me and I will explain how to enable your spell checker that you did not know you have... cool:

And leave the dam chickens alone... can't afford to build a new coupe... hehe oOo:

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"There is a Very Fine Line Between "Hobby and Mental Illness". AND I THINK YOU'VE CROSSED IT!!! evil:

Nice shotty man!!! I was Bucking people up with it last night!!! biggrin:

ttyl on ICQ!

cool. I can't find one thing in that post that made sense biggrin:

I meant Recoil's post sry.

well i understand the catfish part and chickens lol hahah

its either an inside joke or Washington humor! biggrin: evil:

or "Wahington" as recoil spells it..... biggrin: maybe u should invest in that spell checker too!!!! evil:

Huh?
 

Yes inside joke and yes I am way over that line Hobbster.. evil:

I am not sure about the Washington thing though.... eek:

You boys be nice to me or I will put a cap in your ass... you here me hillbilly boys? M16:

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nice job, it great cool: biggrin:

Oh I see you want the SOTRIES to read and sound like a grammatically challenged handicapped person wrote it! Oh that is clever..! hake:

So you made a fix, I assume, using some variation of proper writing lessons and then it killed the story? Hummmm How could it... what story? The way it is written now sounds like a bunch of illiterate gibberish... oOo:

Your screwing up a potential good thing here... but I guess all great writers have just published there shit work and done real well with out the help of an editor... eek:

Attention! Little Johnny you are supposed to come out and play army now... sheesh! cool:

Can't wait to read the next one....

Dude, Chill out man!!! I think you made your point in your 1st post. No need to be an asshole about it. If you dont like it then dont download it!

Your Right
 

Ok, your right... I have gone too far and I apologize.. Just made me furious mad: for a bit and I sure don't know why... Sorry and I apologize to all the members of this forum as well for being an ass. ed:

grammatically challenged handicapped person

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