Glory's flow (war rhyme)
 

Some of my lyrics had to right this for History class on war...

Trench warfare
Frontlines
Blood on hands
Got the soldier in ya crosshair, end lines there
Kill by kill
Pain for pain exchange shots
From the field to the streets from the jungle to the block
When BoRo let they drop but fear not
Its not over, we bout to start world war 3 and get it over
Running thru puddles of blood filled hustle
Fighting for weak heart lies and broken promises

cool: hope ya liked
changed it a bit for forums, I right a lot, very often biggrin:
what cha think?

WERD....YA HEARD?

why did you edit it for the forums?

cool:

just slightly but what u think?

WERD....YA HEARD?

thats sounds about right

cool:

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ur teacher told u to write rap?

poem or rap yea

who s your teacher??? slick rick or sumthin..

Re: Glory's flow (war rhyme)
 

[quote="N O T F || Glory":034f9]I right a lot, very often biggrin:
what cha think?[/quote:034f9]
You right alot? I reed alot, too.

i dont like it

Re: Glory's flow (war rhyme)
 

[quote=Vance1]You right alot? I reed alot, too.[/quote:764b4]

lmao, thx for the fixing that misteak freak:

ok eek: when I make millions then we will see whos liking what, no jk thx for giving ur input, what dont u like? I am working on my demo now and have a manager, I would post more lyrics but I know how people like to flame, and everyone here has their opinions.

cheers

its hard to freestyle on the internet
1-noone knows what beat your going too

goodluck with your career-but most people arent going to listen to rap about history and ww1, but hten again-it is ok. if you have a manager then you must be decent. do you live in canada or US??

yea true, also not everyone listens to rap on these forums but nah bro I dont rap about war, all different things, that was just something I did for History class, im 17 in US.

can you battle? freestyle? 17 min to qrite down five verses? might need to get a job at the store

nah 17 yrs old, I dont battle all my stuff is written and I put in a lot of thought into it. I read the Em spends sometimes hours on one song, thats real.

well i dont know where you live-but i live in a hip-hop community-where everyone and there brother can battle-freestyle-write, whatever. if you release a demo-are you going to sell it? whats your sound like? what city are you from?

Re: Glory's flow (war rhyme)
 

[quote="N O T F || Glory":30ae1][quote=Vance1]You right alot? I reed alot, too.[/quote:30ae1]

lmao, thx for the fixing that misteak freak:[/quote:30ae1]

mmmmmm steak biggrin:

everyone can write but not everyone is good, my fam is from Jerz and Philly, I live in lil ol delaware now but getting out as soon as I turn 18. My demo is being copyrighted, ima sell yea and more than likely put some on this site I may be getting up. Im trying make it, im real focused on this, but I know there is a lot of comp out there, although there is a lot of people, a lot of wasted talent that give up on their dreams too.