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Whatada 01-11-2003 11:46 AM

Story
 
Hey all of you, you want to see a WWll story I wrote? If enough people want me to, I'll post it here. Gimme feedback.....................................NOW!! !!

descry 01-11-2003 11:47 AM

eek:

Captain_McCusker 01-11-2003 11:50 AM

You expect people to be able to read that? oOo:

-=[BAD]=-Thorshammer 01-11-2003 11:52 AM

4 exlimation marks definately the work of a madman.

the best bet if you've already done it to link to it on some webspace some where then those that want to read it can do so and thoses that don't wont have to.

MPowell1944 01-11-2003 11:53 AM

lmao Thor. eek:

Whatada 01-11-2003 12:55 PM

Whatever, I've got a link to it. It leads to another forum. Here you are. All of the ones I've writtin. Believe me, I took my time on them, i just dont take my time with posts.[url:e66ef]http://awits.com/Community/index.php?s=07e8ace282078bfd848fc2d7c8049809&act=S T&f=4&t=218&st=0[/url:e66ef]

Whatada 01-11-2003 01:22 PM

Good, huh, anyone?

snipeymagoo 01-11-2003 01:53 PM

hmm

Magg0t 01-11-2003 03:33 PM

i read most of it...until my eyes dropped anyway..it seemed very good from what i read...i'll finish readin it 2mrw.

Oldguy 01-11-2003 04:25 PM

Not bad at all. I see from the other post's that you are very young. I'm glad to see that some of the younger people here have a grip on what our fathers and grandfathers had to deal with 60 years ago. WW2 is a bit of history that's had a major impact on how we live today. One little thing , "whistle" is spelled with an H. biggrin: Good job!

Innoxx 01-11-2003 04:28 PM

Yes yes, great story, but if you don't stop typing in blue I'm gonna have to do something very awful with a knife, some vinegar, a box-cutter, and a sack full of hungry, rabid, homosexual new york rats. KTHX.

descry 01-11-2003 04:52 PM

Ya what are you thinking?
Stop with the blue font.

Whatada 01-11-2003 05:05 PM

How bout dark red?
Or yellow?
Or maybe white?
Or possibly the basically unseeable black.

innoxx and Winters saving the day from the evil mutant scum from mars.Heh

M16: fire2:

Whatada 01-11-2003 05:08 PM

Make sure you read all three stories there!

Drew 01-11-2003 05:17 PM

Figured I may as well post the link to my story here =P

It's going to be a collection of short stories, here is the first bit of the first one:

Fields of Fire

Whatada 01-11-2003 05:20 PM

No link man, crappy friggin GeoCities. Go to my forum and post it there. That'll work.

Kamil-RS 01-11-2003 05:22 PM

how long is it? if short then post it here
if longer then get it as a doc and host it somewhere and let people DL it

Drew 01-11-2003 05:25 PM

Works for me... but here... linked through my FTP.

http://203rd.xgameservers.com/fieldsoffire.doc

Whatada 01-11-2003 07:27 PM

Hey bud, back off my topic ok? mad:


eatthis:

Drew 01-11-2003 09:14 PM

lol

geRV 01-11-2003 09:16 PM

[quote="Captain Noctis Aeternus":5fb06]lol[/quote:5fb06]


[img]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/gerald.marley/Smilies/lol_hitting.gif[/img]

Whatada 01-12-2003 09:59 AM

Start your own topic for your stories! zooka:

Magg0t 01-12-2003 11:25 AM

winters, i read aal 3 parts of ur storie, write some more, i like them :D

Whatada 01-12-2003 12:37 PM

I'm working on another one right now. It's called Crash and Burn. It's a story of a group of four B-17s that attempt to make a bombing run on a bunker that contains Hitler, Rommel and other Nazi importants. But the plane is hit by enemy ack-ack fire, and they drop far behind enemy lines. Will they survive, and escaped the claws of Nazi Germany. Or will the German war-machine that is the Wehrmacht kill the American heroes?
Stay tuned for the full story on http://www.AWITS.com!


Alex

Whatada 01-12-2003 01:52 PM

its finished, go here to see it!


http://awits.com/Community/index.php?s= ... =218&st=20

Whatada 01-12-2003 05:33 PM

Like it? Huh? Huh? If you don't I'll do this: fire1:
And then maybe some of this: fire2:
Then this: M16:
And you can't forget this: zooka:
And you could NEVER possibly forget this: bigzooka:
And then to top it off, this: eatthis:

Bazooka_Joe 01-13-2003 09:14 AM

Not bad Winters.

Moved to Offtopic. If you want me to move this to the History forums, tell me, I soppose this can go there, too.

MPowell1944 01-13-2003 09:20 AM

Winters nice stories, but man. You got issues. lmao.

=BA-MF=LoneGunner65=2nd=c 01-13-2003 10:13 AM

Its like a hole other forum.

Whatada 01-13-2003 06:12 PM

DUH! It's on my website like in my sig at the bottom (by the way the sig was made by magnum, awesome man!

Whatada 01-17-2003 08:07 PM

Okay people, just got my new story up and running on the forum check it out! I'ts at the bottom, I also drew a picture and scanned it from the first part of Crash and Burn! Check it!


http://awits.com/Community/index.php?s= ... =218&st=20

Airborne Butters 01-17-2003 11:06 PM

Those stories are pretty cool. It's actually inspired me! I think I'll write somtin of the sort, but instead of 101st maybe the Waffen SS, Wehrmanct, or the Fallschrimjager.

redhawk_six 01-17-2003 11:22 PM

I tired writing a WWII story a couple of years ago, but after the first page, I realised it was garbage, and stopped writing. Might try again soon, I don't know.


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