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eek:

You expect people to be able to read that? oOo:

4 exlimation marks definately the work of a madman.

the best bet if you've already done it to link to it on some webspace some where then those that want to read it can do so and thoses that don't wont have to.

lmao Thor. eek:

Whatever, I've got a link to it. It leads to another forum. Here you are. All of the ones I've writtin. Believe me, I took my time on them, i just dont take my time with posts.[url:e66ef]http://awits.com/Community/index.php?s=07e8ace282078bfd848fc2d7c8049809&act=S T&f=4&t=218&st=0[/url:e66ef]

hmm

i read most of it...until my eyes dropped anyway..it seemed very good from what i read...i'll finish readin it 2mrw.

Not bad at all. I see from the other post's that you are very young. I'm glad to see that some of the younger people here have a grip on what our fathers and grandfathers had to deal with 60 years ago. WW2 is a bit of history that's had a major impact on how we live today. One little thing , "whistle" is spelled with an H. biggrin: Good job!

Yes yes, great story, but if you don't stop typing in blue I'm gonna have to do something very awful with a knife, some vinegar, a box-cutter, and a sack full of hungry, rabid, homosexual new york rats. KTHX.

How bout dark red?
Or yellow?
Or maybe white?
Or possibly the basically unseeable black.

innoxx and Winters saving the day from the evil mutant scum from mars.Heh

M16: fire2:

Make sure you read all three stories there!

Figured I may as well post the link to my story here =P

It's going to be a collection of short stories, here is the first bit of the first one:

Fields of Fire