New Weapon Model I Renedered *CRITS PLZ*
 

Hey guys, I was brushing up my skillz today when I got home from school, on modeling. Well after about what 4 hours almost? I finally finished the M4A1 with tactical kobra scope. I would love some crits, but don't go to harsh lol, I been sick and I need to have something make me feel better heh....ENJOY!

[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/models/m4a1-1.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/models/m4a1-2.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/models/m4a1-3.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/models/m4a1-4.jpg[/img]

Sorry but I did not do a poly count yet lol, Its a roughly 2000 prob, but I dont care just brushing up skillz. Ill get a poly count saturday!

Going to Islands of Adventure in Orlando tomorrow so I wont be home tomorrow, SEE YA!

looks fukkin awsome m8y....good work

crazy mad

Why would someone criticize anything that looks as awesome as that good job!!

The scope looks a little boxy, dunno if its supposed to be like that or not though.

SWEEEEEETTTTTT!!!!!!!

the gun is great. finish it quick so we can down load it. on thing thou is that the bend in the clip is a little off from being rounded and more like a jaged bend but that's the only thing that you might want to look at fire1: M16:

Looks very good. Dont forget to post some SSs of it skined

Remember the more poly's the more MOH has to work on displaying an obj.

Dude, that looks friggin' fantastic.


Zone

Very nice bro. Only complaint I would have is the scope site; the mounting bracket is not really defined all that well in shape. I'll see if I can find you a pic to base it on, and show you what I mean.

omg that is awesome. i got a couple questions tho

1) in MP which weapon will it replace?

2) in MP can all the playes see it? if they do not have force models on?
ive never used a gun skin b4.

3) where the hell do i put it? ive never used a gun skin b4
do i use it just like a guts mod? or a character skin? plz help and yes i agree make the scope a little more rounded and the clip looks a little jagged, also not all 3 of the ingraves on the clip are even. Are you going to put the ridges on the barrel? like th1 m16A2 and traditional m4's?

good job! next we need you to replace the BAR skin with a M209SAW!

nice fucking job! biggrin:

The guns handle and ammo clip needs more work.
looks pieced together from many blocks
I will agree, the scope mounting needs more work.

2000 polys!!!
I think its higher then that.

No matter if you THINK you have "skillz", the issue is that model can not be used for the simple fact of-
The poly count is too high, and was built incorrectly.

RUNGSI since you dont model I dont want your advise cuz you don't even know how I modeled it. I modeled it out of 1 box. I did not add any boxes. Its called working and extruding what you need to work with. I used 3 parts, 1 box the main weapon that is from butt to the barral. I added a EXTRA box for the front sight, and a EXTRA tube for the hider on the barral. The poly count is 1941. If you dont know how to model please dont try to put your 2 cents in about one trying to tell me how to do my job.
I have a pro wanting my help on some of his jobs for his movie he is making, and I think I will believe him when he says I model the correct way, seeing he taught me some of my modeling techiques.
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Rest of you:

Thanks! I am not totally finished. I still have to model the rest of the right side and put the detail into it, such as the safty, the clip release.

As for the mount, I know, its not finished, I still have to drill the holes so to speak, and plug it with the screws.

As for questions.


romeo8444:

omg that is awesome. i got a couple questions tho

1) in MP which weapon will it replace? ----None

2) in MP can all the playes see it? if they do not have force models on?
ive never used a gun skin b4. -----None

3) where the hell do i put it? ive never used a gun skin b4
do i use it just like a guts mod? or a character skin? plz help and yes i agree make the scope a little more rounded and the clip looks a little jagged, also not all 3 of the ingraves on the clip are even. Are you going to put the ridges on the barrel? like th1 m16A2 and traditional m4's? ---It wont be for this game nor any game I was just showing my work off for crits before I left on my trip friday. As for the scope mount look above, the barral ingravings will be just like the Special ops M4.


good job! next we need you to replace the BAR skin with a M209SAW! -------Not gonna happen, my next project someone wants me to make the new Ak47 something the newer AK forgot the name.


A HUNGRY FATMAN:

the gun is great. finish it quick so we can down load it. on thing thou is that the bend in the clip is a little off from being rounded and more like a jaged bend but that's the only thing that you might want to look at.

---Yep I know....that was the last thing I added to the weapon. I wanted to get some renders out so I put a quick fix to it and made it look like it curved at least instead of being straight. But like I have said many times, it isnt 100% done.


Thanks for crits, and Rudedog, I will try to get it skinned m8. Even if it is not my skin lol, I got friends who can skin better than I can model.

okay I tried to skin it lol, Im not so good at skinning, but peeps asked for it so I tried....it sucks I know but hey....

[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/models/m4-skinned-1.jpg[/img]

[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/models/m4-skinned-2.jpg[/img]

[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/models/m4-skinned-3.jpg[/img]