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Jotun 07-28-2003 03:01 PM

testing
 
testing, comments/crits

Zoner 07-28-2003 03:15 PM

Not to nitpick on your sentence structure, but...

You have "A soldier never dies, they just fade away". That doesn't work. You should either have:

"Soldiers never die, they just fade away"

or

"A soldier never dies, he just fades away"

See the difference? The singular "soldier" doesn't correspond with the plural word "they".

Akuma 07-28-2003 03:18 PM

LOL.

Looks good Jotun (awsome song)




And zone, your sig looks great too, fire is good.

catalyst 07-28-2003 04:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zoner91
Not to nitpick on your sentence structure, but...

You have "A soldier never dies, they just fade away". That doesn't work. You should either have:

"Soldiers never die, they just fade away"

or

"A soldier never dies, he just fades away"

See the difference? The singular "soldier" doesn't correspond with the plural word "they".

I beleive it's called object-pronoun agreement or something like that

07-28-2003 05:08 PM

its better to burn out then to fade away. morons.

Gonzo 07-28-2003 05:50 PM

good job on the sig

Jotun 07-28-2003 05:52 PM

touche cold, you are 100% correct. i updated it though...

Jotun 07-28-2003 07:38 PM

by cold i mean zoner...


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