Redemption
 

I call it, Redemption.

[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/weridcrossgoldjpg.jpg[/img]



stock photoshop 7.0 for those who don't know how I create.

The color flows wierd

I like it, but the text seems out of place.

Thanks for the constructive crits. I wasn't going to add text, but I decided to.

As for the colors flowing weird, is that good or bad? oOo:

put the text in the middle of the cross

bad, there is visible lines from where the color changes.

god damn'd double posts.

okay, good constructive crits.

I fixed the shitty flow of the light on the black bg.
And I have a version of the text on the 'cross' and a version with no text.

no text:

[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/redemptionnotext1.jpg[/img]


text on cross:

[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/redemptiontextoncross2.jpg[/img]

Change the font and bevel the text.

those lines ares till visible

yeah, I see it, I'll just get rid of the light on the black all together, stupid jpg format looks different than the psd..


edit: okay, here's another version.

[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/redemptiontextoncross5.jpg[/img]

Use a simple blackletter, or light script font.

Use impact and give it an inner bevel.

here's what I came up with, didn't take the font crit, if it's still bad I'll try a font like impact.

[img]http://www.xbox-connection.com/hostedimages/redemptionvariation2.jpg[/img]

Bingo. Blackletter inspired, basically like I said.