M4A1 Try 1
 

My first attempt at an m4a1, and my third model i have ever made. thoughts for improvement? BTW yes i know the top isnt done and the butt looks unfinished and blocky.

[img]http://thedm.game-deception.com/Screens/m4a1try1.JPG[/img]

Everything it to blocky. Some things like the body are to big, details missing. Tons of stuff.

yea for now im just trying to make a basic shape lol..but thx for comments...any specific suggestions for improvement?

the body it to thick. for the butt, start with a cylinder and extrude it till it reaches the body. the do a tube for the top part of the body and a square for the bottom. You will need to extrude alot.


Edit: I just finished modelling the wooden part of a PPSH 2 mins ago. It took me only 8 mins.

Im sry but you suck.. get a better program.. use gmax

dont just use shapes, edit vertices too. thats how u get stuff to be round. dont use boxes, use cylinders.

and use pics for reference

i used a pic as reference, and i did use verticies for the body. i used Milkshape 3d for that.

UPDATE: okay i fixed the butt and added the top thing, i just cant get the part where you would hold if you were in game.

heres three ss

[url=http://thedm.game-deception.com/Screens/m4a1-1.JPG:185dd]M4A1-1[/url:185dd]
[url=http://thedm.game-deception.com/Screens/m4a1-2.JPG:185dd]M4A1-2[/url:185dd]
[url=http://thedm.game-deception.com/Screens/m4a1-3.JPG:185dd]M4A1-3[/url:185dd]

round it out more. grab some of the side vertices and move em to give it that round effect.

The thing on top is not supose to be the same width of the rest. It's still to blocky.

a bit blocky

try looking at some tut's, other than that i dont know what to tell you

yea i read that one that tells to use a backround pic and then use vertexes

I don't know shit about making weapons and stuff, but from what I can see, the basic shape is pretty good. Looks alot like the actual CS M4A1!

Try to smooth it out, and use real sizes, the whole gun isnt the same width in real life.