Messing around in fruity loops
 

had an early class so i threw a beat together this afternoon in a few hours. im still learning the program... its more or less an underground style hiphop beat, let me know what you think! the "chorus" would be the end of the clip, then it would loop around a few times or whatever,
[url:f35a9]http://media.putfile.com/afternoon-beat-march-26-2007[/url:f35a9]

sell the beat to some rap artist and make big bucks oOo:

I bet you can make that track into a winner with a little tune up and sell it to one of those "LiL" dudes.

i like it. Got any ideas for the next part of it? Later on in the track, I'd suggest to do a the same bass line with a more excited rhythm, but in time--using more than one note per bass beat. I probably made something simple sound really retarded. oh well.

Cool so far. beer:

[img]http://robotman.cracked.com/images/20061024/PonyForum1.jpg[/img]
[img]http://robotman.cracked.com/images/20061024/PonyForum2.jpg[/img]
[img]http://robotman.cracked.com/images/20061024/PonyForum3.jpg[/img]
[img]http://robotman.cracked.com/images/20061024/PonyForum4.jpg[/img]
[img]http://robotman.cracked.com/images/20061024/PonyForum5.jpg[/img]

ill mtich would be proud [img]http://images.rottentomatoes.com/images/user/profiles/15/163315/55241049c89beb9e_p.jpg[/img]

thanks!
no ideas really, i probably will never finish it totally, but i know what youre saying. i playing around will more complex rhythms but i couldnt get it to sound decent so i stayed basic, im a beginnner cry: