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Blaster · **Tales...hummmmmmmmmmm -** 01-04-2003, 03:06 PM

I downloaded the Mod and the skins are killer... the idea is fresh and exciting... looks like it is trying to be professional! cool:

However, I hate to be picky but who ever wrote the letter needs to learn to write... i.e., spelling, sentence structure, punctuation, grammer flow, details, etc... heck my 10 year old son can write better than that.. "sorry if your a ten year old" not trying to hurt anyone's feelings here...

But cool idea... just get someone to use spell check at least.... ed:

I have been following the literature stuff here on AA and you might take at look at how they present their story line..

Look forward to the next one.

freak:

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Blaster is Offline Junior Member Posts: 3 Join Date: Jan 2003	Tales...hummmmmmmmmmm - 01-04-2003, 03:06 PM I downloaded the Mod and the skins are killer... the idea is fresh and exciting... looks like it is trying to be professional! cool: However, I hate to be picky but who ever wrote the letter needs to learn to write... i.e., spelling, sentence structure, punctuation, grammer flow, details, etc... heck my 10 year old son can write better than that.. "sorry if your a ten year old" not trying to hurt anyone's feelings here... But cool idea... just get someone to use spell check at least.... ed: I have been following the literature stuff here on AA and you might take at look at how they present their story line.. Look forward to the next one. freak: