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Default 01-05-2003, 05:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Fubah
The sotries are meant to be raw and un fixed in grammer . I was aware of it bro and thanks for your comments . I did do the fix in all fo that and it just killed the story for how it sounded so I decided to keep it as raw as possible right off my fingers and unto the word.doc .

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Oh I see you want the SOTRIES to read and sound like a grammatically challenged handicapped person wrote it! Oh that is clever..! hake:

So you made a fix, I assume, using some variation of proper writing lessons and then it killed the story? Hummmm How could it... what story? The way it is written now sounds like a bunch of illiterate gibberish... oOo:

Your screwing up a potential good thing here... but I guess all great writers have just published there shit work and done real well with out the help of an editor... eek:

Attention! Little Johnny you are supposed to come out and play army now... sheesh! cool:

Can't wait to read the next one....
  
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