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Zoner · 07-28-2003, 02:15 PM

Not to nitpick on your sentence structure, but...

You have "A soldier never dies, they just fade away". That doesn't work. You should either have:

"Soldiers never die, they just fade away"

or

"A soldier never dies, he just fades away"

See the difference? The singular "soldier" doesn't correspond with the plural word "they".

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Zoner is Offline Administrator Posts: 17,739 Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Camp Crystal Lake	07-28-2003, 02:15 PM Not to nitpick on your sentence structure, but... You have "A soldier never dies, they just fade away". That doesn't work. You should either have: "Soldiers never die, they just fade away" or "A soldier never dies, he just fades away" See the difference? The singular "soldier" doesn't correspond with the plural word "they".