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Zoner · 11-13-2003, 12:13 PM

Ok...crits it is:

1) The text needs to be larger and/or standout more. Try using a more appropriate font and ditch the underline.

2) The sig as a whole is glaring, which is what I assume you were going for considering the subject matter. There are a lot more things you could do with fire that would be easier on the eyes

3) The sig doesn't really showcase the character Cinder, does it (Cinder is a comic book hero of some sort, I'm guessing...I'm 30 and not exactly hip with the new heroes around...). The imagery of the character is lost in semi-transparency. Try finding better source pics and bring at least one of them to the forefront with full opacity.

Does that help?

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Zoner is Offline Administrator Posts: 17,739 Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Camp Crystal Lake	11-13-2003, 12:13 PM Ok...crits it is: 1) The text needs to be larger and/or standout more. Try using a more appropriate font and ditch the underline. 2) The sig as a whole is glaring, which is what I assume you were going for considering the subject matter. There are a lot more things you could do with fire that would be easier on the eyes 3) The sig doesn't really showcase the character Cinder, does it (Cinder is a comic book hero of some sort, I'm guessing...I'm 30 and not exactly hip with the new heroes around...). The imagery of the character is lost in semi-transparency. Try finding better source pics and bring at least one of them to the forefront with full opacity. Does that help?