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Kemikalie · 05-10-2004, 03:15 AM

i see what youre trying to do.try this:

that stroke is totally unnecessary imo, take it away or add one a more fiting color, and that goes for the text too. it doesnt fit in the the color scheme.

The pic itself is not very good to start with , but if you are convinced its right you should first think about the perspective, which is not very interesting in this one. try not just to take it straight of, go to the left, down, until you find the right view.

Another thing you cold think abou is color/contrast/levels

but thats just my opinion...

ps: sorry about my poor english, i cant concentrate with a hangover.

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Kemikalie is Offline Senior Member Posts: 727 Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Sweden	05-10-2004, 03:15 AM i see what youre trying to do.try this: that stroke is totally unnecessary imo, take it away or add one a more fiting color, and that goes for the text too. it doesnt fit in the the color scheme. The pic itself is not very good to start with , but if you are convinced its right you should first think about the perspective, which is not very interesting in this one. try not just to take it straight of, go to the left, down, until you find the right view. Another thing you cold think abou is color/contrast/levels but thats just my opinion... ps: sorry about my poor english, i cant concentrate with a hangover.