[quote="Eight Ace":feefd]It's good...but could maybe use some "love interest" in there somewhere.[/quote:feefd]
... with a fellow Kraut ? eek:
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Originally Posted by Sloi
"As the americans stormed the beach, we knew the end was near: looking
deeply into my friend's eyes, I saw in them the same feeling overtaking
him now that took me a few moments ago. We started caressing each other,
getting closer by the second: his head tilted as it neared mine and his eyes
closed as if to say "now..."
As we shared our first and final kiss, the americans burst through the room
and extinguished the flame that we had just now began to feed with our love."
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Somehow, I don't think that fits in...