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Default 06-03-2004, 06:58 PM

Hitler was supposedly asleep when the Beach landings happned, instead of orderign the panzers he slept supposedly.

+ the end was kinda weird. Maybe if you added in the germans retreated/ fireing ended type thing then the end would make more sense. Overall pretty good.
  
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