Well that kinda music for what looked to be a frag video doesn't go very well. 3rd person perspective is also kinda oOo: as there is an exe that was posted here a few weeks back that lets you record demos in first person then just play it back and capture it with fraps. It was a decent attempt but the thirsd person really just looks bad for a frag movie, also on some the of the clips people sere spinning about and it just got annoying to watch. Go here to get the exe and the instructions
http://www.alliedassault.com/phpBB2/vie ... 276#690276
The music was pretty bad for the video, nothing seemed synced, usually people will want to try to time kills to certain beats in the music so it'll look more than just a generic bunch of kills playing along with some music in the background. Might wanna experiment with some filters to make it more visually interesting, some of the stuff in premiere pro is good and can be expanded on in after effects.