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GraveyardDisciple · 07-14-2004, 10:48 PM

Mediocre. Good attempt.

I think it just needs more of something. Make it taller and add a central focus (Maybe a chalk drawing of a dead man or something to that effect...just and example), but keep the general theme and I think it will look much better.

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GraveyardDisciple is Offline Senior Member Posts: 158 Join Date: Jun 2004	07-14-2004, 10:48 PM Mediocre. Good attempt. I think it just needs more of something. Make it taller and add a central focus (Maybe a chalk drawing of a dead man or something to that effect...just and example), but keep the general theme and I think it will look much better.