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Tripper · 07-05-2005, 05:58 AM

I'm afraid that plot sucks. Develop it.

Don't put any particular city, just say he heads to "the big city" and make it generic. (That is, if you want to use that horrible plot).

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Tripper is Offline General of the Army Posts: 18,895 Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Auckland, New Zealand	07-05-2005, 05:58 AM I'm afraid that plot sucks. Develop it. Don't put any particular city, just say he heads to "the big city" and make it generic. (That is, if you want to use that horrible plot).