
10-09-2002, 06:58 PM
[quote:05ac7]OMG I loved it lol. I think you should make it longer, saying different battles or different people. Then again you probably want to ge tthis over with lol.[/quote:05ac7]
Thanks biggrin: I do plan on expanding on it quite a bit more. I am about 7 paragraphs into the battle scene now. Too bad its due tomorrow so I have to rush it (The only good news is that I will have to write another one soon. Ill proablly just do a sequal.) Give me a minute I will post up to where I am now.
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