nice i like the 2nd but that pixel font ruins it as it is a ww2 based sig with computer pixel font oOo: use some german gothic font for it or nothing and use it
No, do with it what you did to the pixel font, change the Gen. and Jackal to white and Black to...black, and move it away from the top corner a little bit. Other then that it's a great sig and I'd say use it.
i disagree ... its not at all legible with the new font, and its a bit too intrusive. the first looked fine ... the only thing i wouldve changed is maybe the size.
i looked at it in photoshop and noticed the text at the bottom ... you might could use that font in that same area just a bit bolder for 'blak jack'. it might fit nicely in the center of that white scribble.
you can also always try to run a semi-transparent rectangle along either the top or the bottom and try to make the text work with it.