[Jotun]

testing, comments/crits

[Zoner]

Not to nitpick on your sentence structure, but...

You have "A soldier never dies, they just fade away". That doesn't work. You should either have:

"Soldiers never die, they just fade away"

or

"A soldier never dies, he just fades away"

See the difference? The singular "soldier" doesn't correspond with the plural word "they".

[Akuma]

LOL.

Looks good Jotun (awsome song)




And zone, your sig looks great too, fire is good.

[catalyst]

Originally Posted by Zoner91

Not to nitpick on your sentence structure, but...

You have "A soldier never dies, they just fade away". That doesn't work. You should either have:

"Soldiers never die, they just fade away"

or

"A soldier never dies, he just fades away"

See the difference? The singular "soldier" doesn't correspond with the plural word "they".

I beleive it's called object-pronoun agreement or something like that

its better to burn out then to fade away. morons.

[Gonzo]

good job on the sig

[Jotun]

touche cold, you are 100% correct. i updated it though...

[Jotun]

by cold i mean zoner...