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Originally Posted by GenBlackJackal

i knew they wernt good fucker, i wanted CRITS. stupid:

I did just that, i critique your work from my opinion. It sucks.

If you want me to be more specific, here you go-

The Him one, what I dont like about it is for one, the text, the low opacity on it makes it look cluttered. And also the brushes are to over done, and also, make it look cluttered. The number on the right, seems to not make sense to me (then again, i dont know if its some HIM thing)

For the car one. Plain and simple, wtf? I see a car, nice car. Then i see a date, October 12, 1956. What does that have to do with the car? The grunge on the left seems WAY to overdone, and cluttered the work. The "TEAM MCP" text seems off for some reason. Also- There is no true Subject matter in the entire thing.

But these are just my opinions.