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Default WIP: M16A1High Detail w/Wireframe pictures. - 04-27-2003, 07:24 PM

Hey guys, need some feedback. This is my WIP M16A1 Vietnam version I am making for my portfolio. It is going to be very detailed and textured when I am finished. It is still early, showed a render test before but dont think many saw it. I still have to model a few things on the right side of the model, and model a clip w/bullets. Well tell me what you think.

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[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-filled.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-wireframe.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-filled-2.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-wireframe-2.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-filled-3.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-wireframe-3.jpg[/img]
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:26 PM

when its in mohaa it'll be nice
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:43 PM

The whole gun itself is a bit too thin....make it fatter.
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:48 PM

You cannot make it "fatter." They all look "thin" in a render. If you were to put them in game they would look "fatter."

If you make it fatter it will make the model out of proportion. It will make it look screwed up.

The saying "make it fatter" comes from a person not a modeler and someone who has no idea how to even think of modeling. Sorry but true. Dont flame me because of this post but I dont care about what someone thinks or it being thin.
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:49 PM

whens it gopnna be in mohaa?
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:50 PM

add a bayonet lug
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:51 PM

amazing! i cant even draw a stick man in ms paint.
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:51 PM

Fine then. The barrell is a little off. Look at refrence pictures, man.
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:52 PM

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whens it gopnna be in mohaa?
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add a bayonet lug
It will have one when it is finished.
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:53 PM

Good job man.


If I recall correctly, the entire rear site assembly, the 'handle', is a bit taller than that.

Other than that it's pretty damn spot on. Can't wait to see it textured.
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:53 PM

cool. also nice job!
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 07:59 PM

Here,

[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/compare.jpg[/img]

Compare...
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 08:01 PM

LOL. Like I said, "If I recall correctly". Time distorts memory.

Let me ammend my previous statement and say GREAT job.
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 08:03 PM

[quote="Sniper Wolf [USAR]":7427e]
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whens it gopnna be in mohaa?
never

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It will have one when it is finished.[/quote:7427e]

............why
  
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Default 04-27-2003, 08:04 PM

The barrel tip could be a bit thicker but thats the only thing I see. Good job.
  
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