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Redemption -
04-07-2004, 06:26 PM
I call it, Redemption.
[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/weridcrossgoldjpg.jpg[/img]
stock photoshop 7.0 for those who don't know how I create.
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04-07-2004, 06:27 PM
The color flows wierd
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04-07-2004, 06:28 PM
I like it, but the text seems out of place.
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04-07-2004, 06:30 PM
Thanks for the constructive crits. I wasn't going to add text, but I decided to.
As for the colors flowing weird, is that good or bad? oOo:
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Senior Member
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Location: motherland
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04-07-2004, 06:34 PM
put the text in the middle of the cross
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04-07-2004, 08:05 PM
bad, there is visible lines from where the color changes.
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04-07-2004, 09:11 PM
god damn'd double posts.
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04-07-2004, 09:12 PM
okay, good constructive crits.
I fixed the shitty flow of the light on the black bg.
And I have a version of the text on the 'cross' and a version with no text.
no text:
[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/redemptionnotext1.jpg[/img]
text on cross:
[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/redemptiontextoncross2.jpg[/img]
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Lieutenant Colonel
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Location: Plymouth, MA
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04-07-2004, 09:14 PM
Change the font and bevel the text.
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04-07-2004, 09:15 PM
those lines ares till visible
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04-07-2004, 09:17 PM
yeah, I see it, I'll just get rid of the light on the black all together, stupid jpg format looks different than the psd..
edit: okay, here's another version.
[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/redemptiontextoncross5.jpg[/img]
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04-07-2004, 09:30 PM
Use a simple blackletter, or light script font.
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Lieutenant Colonel
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04-07-2004, 09:43 PM
Use impact and give it an inner bevel.
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04-07-2004, 09:46 PM
here's what I came up with, didn't take the font crit, if it's still bad I'll try a font like impact.
[img]http://www.xbox-connection.com/hostedimages/redemptionvariation2.jpg[/img]
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04-07-2004, 10:12 PM
Bingo. Blackletter inspired, basically like I said.
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